commentary of article

Commentary on article.

While writing the my article for the metro, there was a number of things I had to do to make it seem very realistic and believable that I was a 50 year old man had wrote this .Firstly I wrote in a standard English register to appeal to my audience and as I this is what my dad would normally speak in with the odd bit of taboo language. I picked to do this article in the metro as I believe that it was the most fitting for this type of restaurant as the restaurant was in London and the metro is for the readers of London. I used grapholgical features such as pictures of the food served and pictures of the actual restaurant to entice readers. The purpose of my text was to inform as well as advice and entertain due to comical features in my text. In the first few paragraphs it was quite off the subject of reviewing the restaurant, it was more around the subject of turning 50 and the associations with being 50 and I decided to talk about this as the reason why we were going out for a meal was for my dad’s 50^th birthday. I decided to waffle for the first few paragraphs to set the scene and comfort readers in to the article, also to entertain. I started off by using a quotation of what my dad said to really make it seem that he said it.